Friday, May 26, 2006

page 9 [found]

Standing next to you outside the darkroom, in the middle of our second conversation about the girl in your photograph who's lips you seem to like, I made a safe assumption that you liked full lips. Why weren't you noticing mine? I secretly wanted to be the girl in the photograph you were working on.
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I saw this lip charm and thought of you. I added it to my charm bracelet as a little reminder of you.

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24 comments:

transience said...

hidden desires. they dangle from our person like charms. :)

Lorena said...

transience - the woman who can impress me with everything that she has to say - i love this! :) thanks.

Anna Piutti* said...

That's such an adorable post, and your bracelet looks very nice :)

Lorena said...

anna, we posted at the same time!! how crazy. anyhow, thank you :)

Nabeel said...

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww .. look at the red lips .. how cute .. and the pink shows .. you know what .. just wear those pink shows .. tap your heels twice and it will take you where ever you want to go .. REALLY want to go .. or to go TO ..

Lorena said...

thank you nabeel, that's a cute thought :) how sweet. "there's no place like home"

Anna Piutti* said...

You're welcome! :)

Maddy said...

i LOVE this charming post!
i want a charm bracelet!
(i have actually collected
charms - antique ones -
i have the eiffel towere)
so now i am inspired to
get a charm bracelet...
you have beautiful lips...

i am sure your loved one noticed!!!!!

smiles

sirbarrett said...

I don't know if this necklace would be allowed on awesomedictatorprincess's (Transience) island since she banished all bling but the thought that counts is sweet. Your desire is passionate. I like it, but you DO have nice full lips! Who was this woman in the picture that someone was staring at?

iamnasra said...

Im so thankful for your poems that inspires me...I do remmeber you so often..when ever my blog is open...I also remmember how I met you through Gulnaz

ufukhati said...

Just look the other way round; to be the all rounder.
"Truth is tougher than gems"
I love gems as I love "truth".

What do you think.

Brood Mode said...

charming post!

pun intendend...

mermaid said...

O sweetie, your lips speak of the wisest words, the sweetest sentiments, and taste the tragedy and triumph of your world.

Pucker up...

Miz BoheMia said...

Most men speak of their desires to those they desire... worry not Lorena and in the meanwhile, pucker up! ;-)

jadedprimadonna said...

A very lovely bracelet indeed! I agree with mix bohemia... maybe he was really thinking of your lips.

eden said...

so sweet .....DESIRE :D


ilove this post !

Pincushion said...

Such sweet innocence..full of unconsummated desire! sighhhh...
:))

Maddy said...

LORENA!!!!!!!!!!
I MISS YOU!
GET A POST OUT HERE!
OR EVEN A PHOTO!!!!!

smiles and whimpering...

Lady Wordsmith said...

Luscious. Luverly and luscious.


- The post that is. (The lips? Goes without say.)

danny said...

This post is poignantly sweet and compelling; I can feel the gnawing pain inside... Lovely bracelet.

Delaleuverses said...

I like it, very cute and feminine

Michael Manning said...

Great post, Lorena! I always enjoy visiting here!!

Silvermoon said...

Oh my, I can relate. Although I'm h.m. I still had a life before him and I *do* remember. Sigh... flutter, flutter.

I still have my charm bracelet from high school. My teens find it fascinating and it's been in style for a few years but that's one thing I won't let them borrow. Too many memories! I do talk to them about the memories.

This past year I bought two charms that remind me of my daughters to bring the bracelet into the present. Sigh, that yearning...feels stronger than gravity, if it were possible.

Lorena said...

maddy :: did you get a charm bracelet? i want to see it! thanks.

sirbarrett :: i love transience's site! i guess i can't take it with me there ;)
not sure who this woman was but thanks :)

nasra :: i'm happy to hear that in some way you get inspired by the poems i send....i do miss gulnaz as well!! i hope she is well. it's so strange. i hope she comes back soon!

ufukhati :: i think it's cool. i love honesty and admire those who live truthfully. thanks for sharing :)

brood mode :: thanks :)

mermaid :: how adorable, thanks for sharing :)

miz bohemia :: good to know, thanks :)

jadedprimadonna :: that's a nice thought...hmmmm, maybe :)

eden :: thanks!

pincushion :: thanks :)

maddy :: i'm working on it!! thanks for the lovely thought :)

lady wordsmith :: luscious - love that word! thanks :)

danny :: thank you! :)

delaleuverses :: thanks :)

michael manning :: i'm glad you do visit :)

silvermoon :: how sweet. your charm bracelet sounds pretty and full of so much meaning. treasure it :)