Monday, September 19, 2005

the summer i met you again

40 comments:

transience said...

lovely. how many times do you get to see something like that? =)

Tomas said...

{sigh}

mermaid said...

Seasons do affect ones mood. I'm still contemplating what mood I'm in for Autumn.

The breeze will blow again, and as the seasons change, so will you, but not your heart.

Lavinia said...

The graphic and the poem complement each other so well...

"You have a big beautiful heart"

perfection. Thank you.

Tomas said...

good point mermaid..... my mood for autumn is change.... it is adventure time (to be continued...)

Amie said...

love your poem. summer is long gone here. raindrops are falling. but i equally love summer and rainy season. each has a charm of its own. in case you're wondering there are only two seasons here- the wet and the dry.

bablu said...

Summer - clouds - grass -birds - looks like U are missing somebody Lorena.

Ghost Particle said...

such a warm post. brings back memories. if only all the seasons brings happy memories to everyone, then the world would be a bettr place to live. If only everyone changes to 'summer'.

rhein said...

i can smell the grass.

DeCoMpOsEd said...

mood is inspired by the seasons... autumn always makes me feel safe for some reason

Lavinia said...

Hey Lorena

I know how much you love Linda Carter.
Look what she's doing in the theatre All that jazz

Lorena said...

transience :: thanks sweetie :)

tomas {sigh} :)

mermaid :: well i'm looking forward to autumn but i'm not to happy about winter just yet :)
thanks for leaving such beauty in words here. you are always so inspiring :)

lavinia :: and you do have a big
beautiful heart :) i don't consider this a poem but thanks. just a little something i wrote for someone.

tomas :: autumn:change, i like that. i usually consider summer my adventure time but now that you mention it, hmmm..(to be continued too...:)

amie :: i love all the seasons as well but as soon as one is ending, i'm missing it. it takes me awhile to adjust but i do and i find the charm in all of them. i love the colorful leaves in autumn :) i remember collecting them for school projects.

bablu :: i guess i am :)

ghost particle :: thank you, that was my intent. i hope they do but i realize they might not. i like what you said "if only everyone changes to summer".
pretty :)

rhein :: *big smile*

decomposed :: really? now i'm going to think of what mood it brings me. i never really thought about it. i know it's a good feeling :)

lavinia :: hi! thanks for the info. i will definitely look into that. i actually saw that musical a few years back. you are so sweet for thinking of me :)


airhead jean :: i don't claim what i write as poetry, people can view it however they'd like. it is however a place with freedom to write whatever one wants (you should know that, i visited your blog :) which confuses me because all my "fans", you can never compete with them!! and maybe jealousy rears its ugly head!!

. : A : . said...

Beautiful poem. Like the way you have structured and use the background to make it stand out.

Lorena said...

thanks A, it wasn't intended as a poem, more of a personal note to someone.

Anil said...

lucky person that...whoever this is intended for!

sirbarrett said...

awww. This is so sweet, and heartfelt! I hope this is the chance you wanted, as it slips past, like sands through the hour glass. It is such sweet sorrow. It couldn't have been any other way though. All leaves do glow brightly with colour, before they wither, and fall. Beautiful thing, this post!

EGO SVM CAROLVS said...

I love reading this piece over and over. :) Glad to know summer had been good to you!

Brood Mode said...

felt great reading it. wonder how the intended person will feel!!!

gusgreeper said...

beautiful! you are the sweetest!

Potted-flower said...

as summer slips, autums digs its leafy talons in. ahh, seasons.

stella said...

summer romances always seem eternal to me. even when the seasons change... they're special in their own memorable ways. what a beautiful card!

Sue hardy-Dawson said...

Love how you lay your thoughts on the grass, summer is a faithless lover, but I have never managed to resist his glowing charms

Lorena said...

thanks anil :)

sirbarrett :: thanks for such an enlightening comment, beautiful :)

carolvs :: yes it was, thanks! :)

brood mode :: thanks, glad you visited :)

gusgreeper :: so are you :)

potted flower :: yes, looking forward to it.

stella :: nicely put. thanks :)

sue hardy-dawson :: love the way you put that "how you lay your thoughts on the grass" very nice. thanks :)

Paul said...

But then you can always sing...

"Let's twist again
Like we did last summer..."

Lorena said...

true true true :)

DeeM said...

Living in the city i miss the smell of fresh cut grass.
But am looking forward to the smell of drying leaves in the park.
awesome post!

Lorena said...

i can't wait for that myself!! :) thanks.

chikididu said...

Places, or yes in this case summers, are all the same. We're the only difference. And on a more cheesy note, the certain people we were with at certain places in certain seasons who are the ones that make all the difference.

But then again, what do I know? I can't even differ my head from my gloves like that's said in a song.

mariposatomica said...

The universe lives in a single blade of grass...

You have enough poems to send out to publishers. Hint, hint or you can self-publish.

El verano se nos escapa como el humo...

Pecos Blue said...

I like that it will happen again. Circular.

Lorena said...

chikididu :: always interesting comments :) you can't tell the difference !! hope you are doing well.

mariposatomica :: wow, that was a beautiful line!! thanks for sharing & thanks always for your sweet suggestions :)

thanks for the spanish dicho as well (is that how you say it?)

pecos blue :: me too! :)

Pincushion said...

How emerald is the grass n how warm the summer...sigh..
It couldn't get any better and sweet sorrow is what its all about, no?
Heres wishing you lovely summers for ever more
:)

Jyotsna said...

Seasons--sigh! i can imagine the feelins..I get easily influenced by them ..the words you have used,the emotions and the feelings are so real and simply heart tugging..and yes "parting is such sweet sorrow"..
I love your blog and this time i am going to be back for sure
:)

Sue hardy-Dawson said...

you're welcome

Josh said...

poor summer :(

Carrie said...

this made me miss summer...sitting in the fields, smelling the freshly cut grass or the moor....oh how lovely. very nice dear. as always. be well. :)

gulnaz said...

one word, beautiful!!!

Lorena said...

pincushion :: yes, summer was sweet. wishing you lovely ones as well :)

jyotsna :: thanks, happy you will return :)

sue hardy-dawson :)

josh :: no it was a good summer! :)

mitzee :: you too, thanks! :)

thanks gulnaz :)

Green-Eyed Lady(GEL) said...

Poignant yet full of promise... lush joyful background- Nice!

Lorena said...

thanks :) glad you visited!!